Wikipedia:Peer review/Hayyim Nahman Bialik/archive1
This is a delicious bio which needs some wikification and perhaps some better cross-linking with related articles and cats. It is linked to a few things now, more according to what information the author thought to write about than by the WP higher-level arts and cats it would belong to. +sj + 02:32, 23 Jan 2005 (UTC)
- I think the lead section could do with some expansion. I have fixed up the heading levels and this exposed the need for an expanded lead section. I would very much like to see more information on the man's works, as this is an intergral part of why he is notable. - Ta bu shi da yu 03:50, 7 Feb 2005 (UTC)